Growing Writers

A few weeks ago, I wrote about the celebrations in a third grade classroom I get to work in. It’s a class that didn’t arrive from second grade believing that they were writers. I’ll be honest, when I first started working with the classroom teacher, I didn’t have a clear vision for how we would fix things. I wasn’t even sure we could.

Today, I arrived for writing and the class was still fully immersed in math. “We just need a few more minutes,” the teacher called to me. “The writing lesson today is a lot.”

I grabbed her unit and scanned the lesson. “I can do it,” I said as she scanned a math workbook. The teacher is new to third grade and we’ve taken a real team teaching approach to our work together.

When math time was officially over, the students gathered on the rug in front of the easel. Our mission today was trying on different text structures for the informational books they were planning. Lofty for sure! As we explored different text structures, we worked to find a chapter from our class book “All About Third Grade” that would work with each structure. The kids seemed to be getting it!

Before sending the kids off to work on their own, I reviewed the steps, jotting them down on a post-it as I went. “First you’ll choose a chapter from your table of contents. Then you’ll think about what text structure might fit. You might try compare and contrast or pros and cons.” At that moment, Jazz, a little guy who has needed a lot of support during writing time, looking right at me. “Like Jazz,” I continued, racking my brain for his topic. “You’re writing about camping, right?” He nodded, a small grin forming on his face. “You might write a pro and con chapter about sleeping in a tent!” I hoped this would be enough to get him going.

As the kids set off to work, the classroom teacher and I got busy, working with individuals and small groups. The room was lost in their work. I never even checked back in with Jazz and I may have even missed this moment had his teacher not called to me from across the room. “We have to share in about four minutes Ms. Carey,” she said looking up at the clock.

That’s when my eyes saw Jazz, busy working at his desk. He looked up and caught me looking at him. “Did you get started writing all by yourself?” I asked him.

I wish I had my camera to capture the smile on his face as he held up his notebook, a neatly outlined pro and con list written across his page.

Things got busy after that. We shared. We celebrated trying hard things. The class went to lunch and I went back to my office. A few minutes later, the teacher popped her head in. “As we were walking to lunch, I heard the kids talking about how they love writing. And not just one or two…a bunch.”

Her smile matched Jazz’s from earlier.

We’re growing writers.

8 thoughts on “Growing Writers

  1. And that is why we teach — to grow writers, readers, teachers, and ourselves. Knowing just the right “curriculum” words (pros and cons) to invite a writer to just do it is the art of teaching. Clearly, the time you have spent in that class with those kids is making a difference. Jazz knows, as do others, that you really care not only about teaching writing, but about each writer and their new to third grade teacher. Again, this is why we teach.

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  2. What I notice here is how success builds upon success – from the strong foundation of your teaching relationship to the way you remembered Jazz’s topic to the quick catch of his eye (funny how important that is) and the compliment all the way to the teacher’s final smile. Sometimes I forget this chain of small successes & get stuck thinking only about the big splashy ones, but here you remind me that each step counts. Also, go Jazz!!

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  3. This is why we need these kinds of relationships in schools. Imagine how the lesson might have gone if it had gone from an overtime math lesson straight into a writing lesson that the teacher thought was “a lot.” Kids can pick up that same feeling. You took the pressure off, so the teacher could step back and see more. It will go differently for them next year…in a good way.

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  4. I love how you captured this small moment in a teaching day. So easily lost, it captures so much of the good work we aspire to. All the comments show how it resonates with teachers. For me, it reminded me of the power of celebrating a student’s work in a very small way, or using their work to illustrate the teaching point. This day made a real difference in Jazz’s investment in school life, I am sure. And promoted respect for all in your classroom.

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